Like an addict needs drugs
And how violence fuels thugs
When my lungs scream to breathe in fresh air
When my broken heart's beat
Leaves my soul incomplete
Til I pluck up the courage to share
Like the stars need the sky
To reflect in your eye
It can make me all fuzzy inside
It's a magical thing
If you're wearing my ring
When we walk hand in hand side by side
When we touch I explore
It's like you cracked the code
And can now pluck the strings of my heart
I can't think for myself
My emotions and health
Seen to suffer when we have to part
Like my blood needs a vein
Or the flowers need rain
Be my anchor when push comes to shove
The sun's need is to shine
And I guess you know mine
My one need in this life is your love
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Author:
peto (
Offline) - Published: August 30th, 2023 04:30
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This is such a powerful declaration of love! "It's a magical thing, if you're wearing my ring"- I had to fan myself when I read this line! "Like my blood needs a vein Or the flowers need rain"! Mmmmmm I love it! ALL OR NOTHING! ❤️
I really appreciate that LIZ
Comments such as this make me want to keep posting
I am extremely grateful and moved by such support
Many thanks
😭😭😭 please continue to post! It's beautiful!
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all I know is it's a lucky gal you wrote this about. It seems like your poetry gets better and better! The last line says it all! I also had to fan myself when reading certain lines of this poem....MORE please!! x
Christina
You really do give me a lift with such kindness
Couldn't do it without such encouragement
Many thanks dear poetess x
Wow. This poem is a masterpiece! Keep them coming!
Thank you very much bee
Truly appreciate such a comment
Much obliged
People fall in love with other people.
I fell in love with the words
Peto you are AMAZING!!!
Rilla
That is a lovely comment
I truly appreciate your support and friendship
Many thanks
Some very lovely words in this writing 🙂 love the mention of the sun and rain .. the star needs the sky ( sometimes another can make us feel more ‘complete ‘ and we can feel wrong without them ..
I like your poem )
Thanks very much Violet
So good to see you here
Appreciate your time and friendship
Support and encouragement
Glad you like this write
I had to read this poem aloud for the beauty of its rhyme and cadence. Such an outpouring of love, all consuming and quite breathtaking. A Master Class in Romantic Poetry!
Ah Bella
Your comments are so uplifting and inspiring
And of course very much appreciated
Very grateful to you
Many thanks
A love that is addicting..
I hope your match is equally addicted!
Nice write!
Can only imagine at that
Needing and having are two different things
I really appreciate your input
Always enjoy your writing and comments
Many thanks
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