one small thing a vulcano

amysliterature

 

hard work and panic

its a normal thing for everyone

everyone and everyday

thought what could stop me

again I failed at normals tasks

of course you can do that

but I can’t

why should I ever feel proud of myself

I never have and never will

try again you say

I am not good at that either I give up

you have other qualities they say

like always and forever

my life a string of failure tied together

 

-AH

  • Author: amysliterature (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 30th, 2023 06:05
  • Comment from author about the poem: did not pass my drivers test thats all yes I am overdramatic
  • Category: Reflection
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  • peto

    "Why should I ever feel proud of myself"
    Talent for writing is a good place to start
    I like to think there is no such thing as a failure l

    There are quitters though
    Your teacher is not the only one who likes your poetry


    • amysliterature

      thank you that means so much to me

    • Soman Ragavan

      Posted on “A small thing a volcano.”
      In your profile you say “My English teacher told me she liked my poetry but she hates me secretly.”
      It has been said “Love and cough cannot be hid.” To that we can add “hatred.” Indeed, our body language is beyond our control. It betrays the deep thoughts going on in our mind. When the body language contradicts our words, it is the body language that should be believed. It is known that body language cannot lie. Through your teacher’s body language you detected that she hates you. Thus, words can say all they want : body language says the truth that one tries to hide behind the words. Look for the small twitches, involuntary movements, the side glances, the eyes flicking about nervously, hands fidgeting, stammering, etc. The speaker will try to hide their real thoughts, but this is not completely possible. There are signs that betray the deep, real thoughts. We have more control over our words; we have time to rethink them, filter them, tone down, etc. But body language happens fast and we don’t really have time to stop it or alter it. Indeed, when there is some contradiction or lying, the jerks, etc., are a response of the organism.
      Soman Ragavan. 16 September, 2023/
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      • amysliterature

        Thank you so much I really enjoyed reading your comment it means so much to me!!!!

        • Soman Ragavan

          You are welcome. Have a nice day. Soman Ragavan.



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