Here’s a piece of paper
blank without words
a quiet dove waiting for the blue
to land lightly with her
a piece of paper sits without words
a quiet dove sits without balance
standing there
empty
waiting
wishing for words
wishing for a voice
wishing to feel she can sing and smile
with a blue sky around her
and words lightly blinking
she can finally stand up , sing
outside world helping her to be
more than a quiet dove unable to sing her song
-
Author:
Yellow rose (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: August 30th, 2023 10:26
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 14
Offline)
Comments7
Ahhhh I missed your poems! Rebirth? 🌼 🌸 🌻
Thanks liz 🙂 I’m not sure .. maybe just about feeling better ..I guess paper may feel a little bit ‘ wrong without words .. just like a dove may without the blue sky
And yeah I guess we all need to feel we can express / use our voice .. be heard , seen or we may feel a little sad
Thanks )
Coo - a good poem V. lol.
Thankyou orchidee .. appreciate the comment 🙂 doves are lovely birds
Hope it is smiling now
As it is definitely singing with these words
Great to see a write from you
Thankyou peto 🙂 appreciate the kind words on my poem .. yeah , I havnt been writing so much recently ..
Glad my writing was enjoyed
this is truly lovely and very muchly enjoyed ..
Thankyou for the kind words on my poem))
She is a Mourning Dove, and her voice so beautiful that whenever I hear it I smile. Thank you for your voice, for you make me smile with this lovely poem.
Thankyou Bella 🙂 appreciate your kind words . Glad my words can make another smile , and glad you enjoyed my writing ..
Sometimes I feel in that place where I feel stuck and I just can’t think what to write about .. so yeah went with the idea of writing about the piece of paper before me .,
Sing away Violet and bring happiness to us all.
Andy
Appreciate the kind words , Andy )) it’s always nice to be able to express myself be creative .. and it’s always nice to know that another can like my words
Your last words say it all dear Rose, an exquisite write. Beautiful imagery as your writing always has. 💖
Thankyou for your support and kind words , teddy 🙂🌸
It’s nice to know that you enjoy my writings
To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.