Massage

peto

Hot  oil upon a willing back 

Her senses fight a heart attack 

A trickle finds a route all of it's own 

His hand distributes even strokes 

The tenderness that lust evokes 

Her inhibitions exit with a groan 

Their shadows merge into a dance 

The candlelight's wink at romance 

Illuminates the scene with naked flame 

Her protests don't amount to much

His ever more intrusive touch 

A gasp escapes her mouth to form his name 

She turns gyrating wanton hips 

He met her soft demanding lips 

His tongue prepares her canvas for more oil

His hands return to late to slow 

Her tsunami's ecstatic flow 

Her passion needs release when brought to boil 

She looks up with impatient eyes 

Pulls him on top of thrusting thighs 

The wildcat she had caged is running free 

She scratches nibbles tears and bites 

His skin responds to these delights 

By making sure she hits o number three

 

 

  • Author: peto (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 31st, 2023 03:07
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 21
  • Users favorite of this poem: Christina8
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  • LIZ

    Mmmmm 🥵 Did you know number 3 during intimacy means you love trying out new things? So ummmmm yeah...definitely running free! Loved this!

    • peto

      Every day's a school day
      Thank you LIZ
      Nothing ventured nothing gained
      I really appreciate you reading and commenting

    • MissD

      uuhhhhhmmmm SO WELL WRIITTEN
      it made me take a deep breath after reading it

      • peto

        Thank you mrs
        Aaaaaand exhale
        Truly appreciate your read and comment
        Extremely grateful

        • MissD

          no worries we're here to appreciate your ART

          • peto

            Our art

          • Pop64

            The imagery in this really allows the reader to be part of the write, the actual stimulating sensation of the massage. Wonderful read!

            • peto

              Very pleasing comment for me to read pop
              Really grateful
              Many thanks

            • Parisab

              ‘The tenderness that lust evokes’ capturing the right balance between, is talent, in your poem-and then my favorite is the stanza about treating the canvas for more oil-nicely done poet peer-

              • peto

                Thank you very much parisab
                A very kind and encouraging comment
                Appreciate your time to read
                And your input
                Extremely grateful

              • Bella Shepard

                In Greek phylosophy the number 3 was considered as the perfect number of harmony, wisdom and understanding. I'd say you hit all three with a bang (no pun intended) in this one. Wow!

                • peto

                  Twice I've been told that today Bella
                  And I'll be honest I didn't know
                  Thank you very much for reading commenting and educating
                  I really appreciate it
                  Much obliged

                • Christina8

                  This is an incredible poem! It invokes so many emotions. Is it hot in here? Loved the last line! She deserves an 0 for the third time! Awesome job!

                  • peto

                    Hi Christina
                    Well if she trusts me with her body
                    She definitely deserves it
                    Always good to see you
                    And always appreciate you
                    Many thanks



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