Hot oil upon a willing back
Her senses fight a heart attack
A trickle finds a route all of it's own
His hand distributes even strokes
The tenderness that lust evokes
Her inhibitions exit with a groan
Their shadows merge into a dance
The candlelight's wink at romance
Illuminates the scene with naked flame
Her protests don't amount to much
His ever more intrusive touch
A gasp escapes her mouth to form his name
She turns gyrating wanton hips
He met her soft demanding lips
His tongue prepares her canvas for more oil
His hands return to late to slow
Her tsunami's ecstatic flow
Her passion needs release when brought to boil
She looks up with impatient eyes
Pulls him on top of thrusting thighs
The wildcat she had caged is running free
She scratches nibbles tears and bites
His skin responds to these delights
By making sure she hits o number three
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Author:
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Mmmmm 🥵 Did you know number 3 during intimacy means you love trying out new things? So ummmmm yeah...definitely running free! Loved this!
Every day's a school day
Thank you LIZ
Nothing ventured nothing gained
I really appreciate you reading and commenting
uuhhhhhmmmm SO WELL WRIITTEN
it made me take a deep breath after reading it
Thank you mrs
Aaaaaand exhale
Truly appreciate your read and comment
Extremely grateful
no worries we're here to appreciate your ART
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The imagery in this really allows the reader to be part of the write, the actual stimulating sensation of the massage. Wonderful read!
Very pleasing comment for me to read pop
Really grateful
Many thanks
‘The tenderness that lust evokes’ capturing the right balance between, is talent, in your poem-and then my favorite is the stanza about treating the canvas for more oil-nicely done poet peer-
Thank you very much parisab
A very kind and encouraging comment
Appreciate your time to read
And your input
Extremely grateful
In Greek phylosophy the number 3 was considered as the perfect number of harmony, wisdom and understanding. I'd say you hit all three with a bang (no pun intended) in this one. Wow!
Twice I've been told that today Bella
And I'll be honest I didn't know
Thank you very much for reading commenting and educating
I really appreciate it
Much obliged
This is an incredible poem! It invokes so many emotions. Is it hot in here? Loved the last line! She deserves an 0 for the third time! Awesome job!
Hi Christina
Well if she trusts me with her body
She definitely deserves it
Always good to see you
And always appreciate you
Many thanks
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