I forgot the colors.
I've been in the dark for so long.
For so long since you left
I know the only color you like now is black too.
You should be here when I need you. I should have been with you when you asked me what colors the world should have.
Here we are you with the frame and me with the cage.
We are at a distinct stage in the jail system.
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Fy_ (Pseudonym) (
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beatiful and painful..loved it
My comments on the poem "Absence of a rosy” by Fy_
This is a poem of sadness and wishing for the loved one to return. Notice the words showing despair or regrets : forgot the colors; in the dark; the only color you like now is black; when I need you; should have been; you with the frame; me with the cage; distinct stage; jail system.
Although the poem has just eight lines, they are full of sorrow.
What is the difference between the frame and the cage ? Anyway, cage represents jailing, preventing movements or freedom.
What is “distinct” ? It probably means separate.
Soman Ragavan. 1 September, 2023. //
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