Future yet unseen
promises of hope await
Tomorrow's promise
Good write C. It can get confusing, I think. When it gets to 'tomorrow', then it's always 'today'. How to find 'tomorrow'?! heehee. I talk some rubbish sometimes - excuse me! lol.
Thanks, I will try to make some corrections. No worries
It's only my daft joke about 'tomorrow' - not that the poem is confusing. lol.
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Good write C.
It can get confusing, I think. When it gets to 'tomorrow', then it's always 'today'. How to find 'tomorrow'?! heehee.
I talk some rubbish sometimes - excuse me! lol.
Thanks, I will try to make some corrections. No worries
It's only my daft joke about 'tomorrow' - not that the poem is confusing. lol.
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