In a dimension where there is no time
past, future and present occur simultaneously
where the vile becomes sublime
knowing everything and nothing spontaneously
Creation and destruction the same
where down becomes above
everything turns back on the same plane
and even hate becomes love
Where there is no cooperation or resist
inanimate and living no longer independent
Where just because I think, doesn't mean I exist
Where consciousness is transcendent
No wrong or right
where there is no matter or energy
no dark or light
there are no laws, gravity or entropy
Here significance has no point
location is meaningless
Existence and nonexistence are joint
start and end beginningless
All is nothing, zero is infinity
stuck in a bubble of no dimensions
here there is no history
just eternal suspension
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Author:
sorenbarrett (
Offline) - Published: September 2nd, 2023 22:24
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Comments3
This is wonderful starting with your title you have delved into the behind the scene which isn't always easy to do. Beautiful. 💖
Thanks Teddy your review is appreciated as are your most kind words.
!Brilliant!
'Here significance has no point
location is meaningless
Existence and nonexistence are joint'
what refined lines
what depth of wisdom you showcase
what poetic delight
(I bow to your superior talent, wise Poet)
thank you!
So appreciate your encouraging words L.B.
This is now....
Thanks for defining it so clearly, Soren.
Thanks Dave your wit escapes me and that is what I love about dry humor. As clear as a foggy day. lol. Always appreciate your review and comments.
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