My girlfriend is both soft and gentle
She's sweet, kind and so sentimental
Though I'm past eighty-three
She's the whole world to me
We own each other this is no short term rental
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Author:
hzugman (
Offline) - Published: September 3rd, 2023 08:53
- Category: Friendship
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Comments3
Nice! Like the words you chose and short, sweet and to the point 🙂
Thanx, Suetah.
🙂
Old school magic
You are a lucky man
And I'm sure she is a lucky lady
Loved the rhyme
Thanx Peto and you're right we're both very lucky.
favorite line is when u say " though i'm pass eighty-three u mean the whole world to me"
Thank you so much for your kind comment. Fortunately for me it's all true
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