My girl, my girl, my girl

hzugman

My girlfriend is both soft and gentle

She's sweet, kind and so sentimental

Though I'm past eighty-three

She's the whole world to me

We own each other this is no short term rental

  • Author: hzugman (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 3rd, 2023 08:53
  • Category: Friendship
  • Views: 9
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Comments3

  • Suetah

    Nice! Like the words you chose and short, sweet and to the point 🙂

    • hzugman

      Thanx, Suetah.

      • Suetah

        🙂

      • peto

        Old school magic
        You are a lucky man
        And I'm sure she is a lucky lady
        Loved the rhyme

        • hzugman

          Thanx Peto and you're right we're both very lucky.

        • vividvoid14

          favorite line is when u say " though i'm pass eighty-three u mean the whole world to me"

          • hzugman

            Thank you so much for your kind comment. Fortunately for me it's all true



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