Melody of a cremated soul

arial

Poetry art sketching and all....

Why people praise a singer's song.?

It's a story a phase they couldn't take anymore 

A feeling a desire that killed their soul...

but it amazed the heeders a response unknown.....

A compliment a desire over the funeral of their own...

Is this sanity or am I short on course...?

Cause the reason they gave....it was never enough for a morgue

  • Author: arial (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 3rd, 2023 17:25
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • AuburnScribbler

    I has to read this, because of the title alone, which is an absolute corker!

    Wonderfully written here arial, and the two questions you have raised in this poem, are incredibly pertinent, as with today, there is a lot of over idolising of celebrities, to jump on some sort of bandwagon, and with hardships repeating all over the world, the clear increase of the concern of people's mental health.

    If only such praises that are given to such art (for the right reasons), can be the foundation of a change in the way we operate, as a species.

    Bravo, and I hope that all is well.

    • arial

      Aah...thankyou so much for your compliments....hmm.. ..I do agree with your thoughts you expressed on this poem wonderfully explained...and....all is well and I hope thats the same case for you.....😇

    • Thomas W Case

      Phenomenal.

      • arial

        Thankyou..appreciated



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