One windy day on the flatland,
I'll take your hand on mine,
like old times...
And we'll gaze across the grey waves,
the weathered -beaten dunes
with their soft dips and curves ...
Ostend shall scatter my sorrows,
and I walk on the dreamy paths ...
Love will tell of ancient desires,
and other moist stories...
Comments1
ok I related to your words
enough to overcome my distaste
for that unseemly word 'moist'
nothing else can express
how much i enjoyed reading your Poem
thank you!
After reflection I kept the final ''wetness '' of the story but adding an adjective ,giving it a more (amore !) general meaning .
'' And other moist stories ''
Thanks for your inspiring remark !
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