Beautifully broken! But you know, I've learned that during that solo performance, insight comes in. So much comes to light....if we allow it!! Loved it! 💖
OMG! "keys from a past life that were once
finely tuned to perfection
now playing a blank sheet of music
I am silent
I am blind
I am lost."
You have found perfection in this piece, the poem entwined with this beautiful picture. You amaze me dear friend, over and over again.
My heart is truly grateful to you dearest Bella, as you are one of my favourite poets of all time. You make my work come alive. 💖 thank you for your absolute graciousness. 💖
and I am immersed
what atmosphere you've imbued into this poignant words
love the simplicity in wording,
making it that much more accessible
a sombre yet lovely write,
thank you! dear Poetess
My comments on the poem "Blank sheet” by Teddy.15
Thus, love has departed. This has resulted in frustration and resentment. There is even anger in the heart. From anger hardly anything positive can come out. It turns out that the musical performance is a solo one. It is even a performance from which no sounds come out : “total silence.” Even the piano keys are not those of the present. In the past they played perfect renditions. Now they play music from which no sound comes out. The instrument and the poetess are silent. The poetess is turned both blind and lost. A frustrated love can have this troubling effect. Emotionally affected writers are known to write tragedies or sad stories. Soman Ragavan. 23 September, 2023. //
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Beautifully broken! But you know, I've learned that during that solo performance, insight comes in. So much comes to light....if we allow it!! Loved it! 💖
Such a gorgeous thought my dear Liz thank you darling. 💖
I never knew it was like this for us - you and me! 🤣
Do shut up Orchi, says Fido! lol.
Oh orchi, a bit of drama never hurt anyone lol you and me top notch, I won't tell KP if you don't lol 🤣
I will sneak off without KP knowing! lol.
Ah but thou art kintsugi .. a phoenix and my very dearest Teddy ❤️ so perfectly poemed .. Neville ❤️
Thank you my dearest Nev. ❤️
Bit of Franch there? Kintsugi. lol.
Sad yet Beautiful words , teddy 🙂🌸 like the feel to this piece of writing .. like the mention of that piano
Hello my dear rose, thank you dear friend. 💖
OMG! "keys from a past life that were once
finely tuned to perfection
now playing a blank sheet of music
I am silent
I am blind
I am lost."
You have found perfection in this piece, the poem entwined with this beautiful picture. You amaze me dear friend, over and over again.
My heart is truly grateful to you dearest Bella, as you are one of my favourite poets of all time. You make my work come alive. 💖 thank you for your absolute graciousness. 💖
My dear, you my make words come to life; dance, sing, love, pray. I admire and respect the God given talent that you have.
and I am immersed
what atmosphere you've imbued into this poignant words
love the simplicity in wording,
making it that much more accessible
a sombre yet lovely write,
thank you! dear Poetess
Thank you my dear Mek, I find using big words just isn't me so I am ever grateful when other writers can see 💖
My comments on the poem "Blank sheet” by Teddy.15
Thus, love has departed. This has resulted in frustration and resentment. There is even anger in the heart. From anger hardly anything positive can come out. It turns out that the musical performance is a solo one. It is even a performance from which no sounds come out : “total silence.” Even the piano keys are not those of the present. In the past they played perfect renditions. Now they play music from which no sound comes out. The instrument and the poetess are silent. The poetess is turned both blind and lost. A frustrated love can have this troubling effect. Emotionally affected writers are known to write tragedies or sad stories. Soman Ragavan. 23 September, 2023. //
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Thank you very .inch for another wonderful review. Very kind 🤗
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