Ah yes...
and the great
Time-Machine
I wonder will it be me
who invents it first?
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Author:
Teddy.15 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: What would you do? 🤣
- Category: Humor
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Ohhhh you're in the creative mind vibe! If the time machine looks like the one on the picture I'm in! 😁 magical!! 💖
Ah but what would you do if you could possibly go back in time or into the future lol 🤣 oh endless thought today thank you Liz ❤️
😆 lol see, now you got me thinking! I don't know if I even want to go back...maybe forward...but I feel like things just wouldn't be the same!
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I'd go into the past an hour
Get back the time I've already been thinking of this
You can be a torment Teddy lol
LOL oh that's a good one. Thanks so much dear Peto ❤️
funny that .. and there I was thinking it was just me ❤️
Mind twins lol ❤️
would it be ok to go back and change certain things? I wonder;
go back and share a drink with Dylan Thomas....yes;
go back and marry Sylvia Plath...yes;
what else I wonder;
Ah you have such a poetic heart. And yes it would be perfect, and what a day to meet your Sylvia Plath, she would have adored you. 💖
Good write Doctor, erm, Who - erm, Teddy!
Ere, I would have gone back to push KP out the line lol 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Liked the picture and the poem, short but to the point. My time machine is my dreams and it has been there for a long time.
Ah,and may it come true my friend. Thank you for coming along to my silly scribbles ❤️
Inventing the time machine could be a lot like Forrest Gump's box of chocolates "You never know what you're going to get". For myself, I'd have to say the 60"s, when I was young and on the cusp of discovering the world, and who I was in it. You pose a real philosophical quandry in a few short lines, for the twists and turns of life are never in plain sight. You've made me think real hard my friend, and I think I'll take the rest of the day off to contemplate. lol
LOL you see my title works, oh my dear Bella, I shall join you for the twist in the 60's and then we should go back to write a wonderful poem. Thank you dear friend. 💓
It's always my pleasure and privilege to read your poems. You'd have to join me for the twist in the 60's, cause I'd probably break something if I tried it today. It would be quite a poem, wouldn't it?
I'll race you!
lol
just lovely
light but meaningfully deep
thank you
LOL would you go back in time and invent it before me? 🤣
have I already?
😉
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