I've seen some truly wondrous sights
Total eclipse the northern lights
I've held a hatching turtle in my hand
A rare blue moon and one blood red
Creatures upon an ocean bed
A mother nurse her newborn baby lamb
I witnessed this magnificence
Pale into insignificance
And all she had to do was flash a smile
She looked me in the eye and said
I'm not expecting us to wed
But let's indulge each other for a while
By the arm I was taken
A feeling of bliss
In my head
Was a loosening vice
In her arms I was given
A velvety kiss
She had led me
Into paradise
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Author:
peto (
Offline) - Published: September 6th, 2023 03:48
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- Users favorite of this poem: LIZ, Teddy.15, Bella Shepard, Introverted Sage
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Comments6
Oh my!! What a sight! I think you know by now I love the moon...all its phases! So, you're pulling at my heart strings! "I'm not expecting us to wed, But let's indulge each other for a while" Mmmmm delicious!! 🌙 🌚 🌔 🌕 🌖 🌛
Such a kind response LIZ
Hope you know how much it is appreciated
Many thanks
This is beautiful )) a lovely way with words 🙂
As is your comment
Thank you very much Violet
How stunning and your imagery and the northern lights wow I have never seen yet. 💖 a poetic gem my friend.
Thanks very much Teddy
Truly appreciate your enthusiasm and support
Extremely grateful
Full marks for a fantasy I enjoyed.....
Thank you Dave
More about memory than fantasy
Great to hear you enjoyed
Very grateful for your time
Look forward to returning the compliment
You provided the material - I had the fantasy.
I found that reading this poem aloud gave it a whole new dimension. Speak it quickly and feel its intensity. Speak it slowly and savour every nuance of its beauty. Stunning!
I find your comments give it a whole new dimension
Can't thank you enough for such kind words Bella
Truly grateful
'I witnessed this magnificence
Pale into insignificance'
To have such a deep love and reverence for a person is so beautiful, yet incredibly difficult I imagine. Your poetry always describes the visceral dichotomy so incredibly. Sometimes discreetly sometimes raw, all times brilliant!
Sage
I am humled by such a positive and kind comment
Thank you very much
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