Lacrime

Teddy.15

 
With every pair of eyes
 
you look into
 
there comes a story.  
 
  • Author: Teddy.15 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 7th, 2023 04:13
  • Comment from author about the poem: Lacrime, means tears in Italian. ❤️
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 24
  • Users favorite of this poem: Soman Ragavan, L. B. Mek
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  • LIZ

    Absolutely! And in my case....you have to dig deep to truly see it!!! Loved this one!!! 💖

    • Teddy.15

      Thank you dearest Liz. 💓

    • Neville



      eye knew that my petit lacrimal duct ..
      and I swear this is perfect ❤️

      • Teddy.15

        It's a sad day today dear Nev. Biggest of hugs to you darling friend. ❤️

        • Neville



          I have a good ear, should you ever need it ❤️

          • Teddy.15

            Awe thanks darling this was in dedication for our beautiful Gracy, I couldn't have put anything else yesterday. 💖

          • Doggerel Dave

            Saw this as "lachrymose" and in the end wasn't far off the mark.....

            • Teddy.15

              Thank you Dave. 💖

            • orchidee

              Good write T.
              Yep, as I look into KPs eyes, I see a botox story! lol.

              • Teddy.15

                LoL 🤣

              • Lorenz

                A visual way of haiku !

                • Teddy.15

                  I don't think this is classed as haiku because my syllables are not there, but thank you for your lovely encouraging words. 💖

                  • Lorenz

                    the reason I used the word ''visual '' ! haiku in the space !

                    • Teddy.15

                      Ah, thank you 💖

                    • Bella Shepard

                      Dear Teddy, You pack into three lines the hopes, fears, happys, sads, pain, love, that are a lifetime. The eyes are truly the window of the soul, as you have so beautifully written! May your eyes always shine and your tears be those of joy!

                      • Teddy.15

                        My dear dear Bella, we lost one of our own today Gracey, today I'm so very sad. Thank you my dear poet friend. 💖

                        • Bella Shepard

                          Dearest Teddy, I am so very sorry for your loss. May God bless her, and you in your grief. Take care!

                          • Bella Shepard

                            I just read Neville's poem about Esme Cameron, now I know who you've lost. What a remarkable life she had. Please let me know how I can find her writing, I would love to read it. I tried googling her name, but didn't have much luck. Was she on MPS, if so what name do I look for?

                          • sorenbarrett

                            So true, each one as different as the print of the eye. Proof that short is best a powerful statement.

                            • Teddy.15

                              Thank you so much for this very kind review 💖

                            • peto

                              Bloodshot and teary
                              Says more than a million words could
                              Deepest condolences

                              • Teddy.15

                                Awe thank you my dear Peto. 💖

                              • L. B. Mek

                                amen!
                                in this deftly worded truth
                                is a key
                                to our inherited empathy..

                                • Teddy.15

                                  Indeed, we sometimes forget that behind a pair of eyes there might be something extraordinary in pain. Thank you my dear Mek. 💖

                                • Pop64

                                  A short, but yet a truthfully clear and poignant write. Wonderfully done!

                                  • Teddy.15

                                    Thank you so much for coming by to read another scribble of mine. So very much appreciated 💖



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