Dear Teddy, You pack into three lines the hopes, fears, happys, sads, pain, love, that are a lifetime. The eyes are truly the window of the soul, as you have so beautifully written! May your eyes always shine and your tears be those of joy!
I just read Neville's poem about Esme Cameron, now I know who you've lost. What a remarkable life she had. Please let me know how I can find her writing, I would love to read it. I tried googling her name, but didn't have much luck. Was she on MPS, if so what name do I look for?
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Absolutely! And in my case....you have to dig deep to truly see it!!! Loved this one!!! 💖
Thank you dearest Liz. 💓
eye knew that my petit lacrimal duct ..
and I swear this is perfect ❤️
It's a sad day today dear Nev. Biggest of hugs to you darling friend. ❤️
I have a good ear, should you ever need it ❤️
Awe thanks darling this was in dedication for our beautiful Gracy, I couldn't have put anything else yesterday. 💖
Saw this as "lachrymose" and in the end wasn't far off the mark.....
Thank you Dave. 💖
Good write T.
Yep, as I look into KPs eyes, I see a botox story! lol.
LoL 🤣
A visual way of haiku !
I don't think this is classed as haiku because my syllables are not there, but thank you for your lovely encouraging words. 💖
the reason I used the word ''visual '' ! haiku in the space !
Ah, thank you 💖
Dear Teddy, You pack into three lines the hopes, fears, happys, sads, pain, love, that are a lifetime. The eyes are truly the window of the soul, as you have so beautifully written! May your eyes always shine and your tears be those of joy!
My dear dear Bella, we lost one of our own today Gracey, today I'm so very sad. Thank you my dear poet friend. 💖
Dearest Teddy, I am so very sorry for your loss. May God bless her, and you in your grief. Take care!
I just read Neville's poem about Esme Cameron, now I know who you've lost. What a remarkable life she had. Please let me know how I can find her writing, I would love to read it. I tried googling her name, but didn't have much luck. Was she on MPS, if so what name do I look for?
So true, each one as different as the print of the eye. Proof that short is best a powerful statement.
Thank you so much for this very kind review 💖
Bloodshot and teary
Says more than a million words could
Deepest condolences
Awe thank you my dear Peto. 💖
amen!
in this deftly worded truth
is a key
to our inherited empathy..
Indeed, we sometimes forget that behind a pair of eyes there might be something extraordinary in pain. Thank you my dear Mek. 💖
A short, but yet a truthfully clear and poignant write. Wonderfully done!
Thank you so much for coming by to read another scribble of mine. So very much appreciated 💖
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