Lacrime

Teddy.15

 
With every pair of eyes
 
you look into
 
there comes a story.  
  • Author: Teddy.15 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 7th, 2023 04:13
  • Comment from author about the poem: Lacrime, means tears in Italian. ❤️
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 21
  • Users favorite of this poem: Soman Ragavan, L. B. Mek.
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Comments10

  • LIZ

    Absolutely! And in my case....you have to dig deep to truly see it!!! Loved this one!!! 💖

    • Teddy.15

      Thank you dearest Liz. 💓

    • Neville



      eye knew that my petit lacrimal duct ..
      and I swear this is perfect ❤️

      • Teddy.15

        It's a sad day today dear Nev. Biggest of hugs to you darling friend. ❤️

        • Neville



          I have a good ear, should you ever need it ❤️

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        • Doggerel Dave

          Saw this as "lachrymose" and in the end wasn't far off the mark.....

          • Teddy.15

            Thank you Dave. 💖

          • orchidee

            Good write T.
            Yep, as I look into KPs eyes, I see a botox story! lol.

            • Teddy.15

              LoL 🤣

            • Lorenz

              A visual way of haiku !

              • Teddy.15

                I don't think this is classed as haiku because my syllables are not there, but thank you for your lovely encouraging words. 💖

                • Lorenz

                  the reason I used the word ''visual '' ! haiku in the space !

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                • Bella Shepard

                  Dear Teddy, You pack into three lines the hopes, fears, happys, sads, pain, love, that are a lifetime. The eyes are truly the window of the soul, as you have so beautifully written! May your eyes always shine and your tears be those of joy!

                  • Teddy.15

                    My dear dear Bella, we lost one of our own today Gracey, today I'm so very sad. Thank you my dear poet friend. 💖

                    • Bella Shepard

                      Dearest Teddy, I am so very sorry for your loss. May God bless her, and you in your grief. Take care!

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                    • sorenbarrett

                      So true, each one as different as the print of the eye. Proof that short is best a powerful statement.

                      • Teddy.15

                        Thank you so much for this very kind review 💖

                      • peto

                        Bloodshot and teary
                        Says more than a million words could
                        Deepest condolences

                        • Teddy.15

                          Awe thank you my dear Peto. 💖

                        • L. B. Mek

                          amen!
                          in this deftly worded truth
                          is a key
                          to our inherited empathy..

                          • Teddy.15

                            Indeed, we sometimes forget that behind a pair of eyes there might be something extraordinary in pain. Thank you my dear Mek. 💖

                          • Pop64

                            A short, but yet a truthfully clear and poignant write. Wonderfully done!

                            • Teddy.15

                              Thank you so much for coming by to read another scribble of mine. So very much appreciated 💖



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