Why do I
Why do I feel alone?Why do I feel so thrown?
Why do I feel isolated?
Why my fate is ill-fated
Why do I don't get life's take,
Why do I feel everyone is fake?
I am really feeling so blue,
Coz no one is true!
- Author: nehemiah adams (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: September 7th, 2023 09:46
- Comment from author about the poem: these are alll questions i had myself and others have asked me
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 8
Comments3
I am so glad that you write about all kinds of emotions such as pride, joy, and even isolation. Life is a source of inspiration, take your time and look at the whole picture. Hope is your fuel each day. Your poetry at your age (and beyond) is special, poet friend…
thanks again for your comment, always brings a smile to my face
It's a good poem
thanks chris
You pour out your heart out in this poem, and I feel the intensity of your words leap out at me. You have a remarkable style of your own that is unique, and the talent to use it forcefully. Keep it up my friend, you are going places.
thank you agian ms. bella
you always know what to say
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