Autumn's Painting

Teddy.15

 

 
 
dancing shadows of leaves
 
tell me it's autumn
 
colorful shades, turning from bright green
 
to yellows and pinks, pumpkin orange
 
then to soft browns
 
sunshine beaming
 
through the skeleton of the great oak
 
all the while I'm wondering
 
how could the transition
 
from this now, dozing summer
 
be so glorious?
 
 
 
 
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  • orchidee

    A fine write Teddy.

    • Teddy.15

      Thanks so much my orchidear 💖

    • L. B. Mek

      reading this
      in london, enduring another heatwave
      despairing for autumnal leaves
      and that blessed fresh breeze of relief
      'HELP, ME!'
      lol
      just beautiful imagery dear Poetess
      thank you!

      • Teddy.15

        I know,I cannot cope with the thought of it,never ever happened when I lived there. Usually this month is rain wind and wet. 💖 thanks darling poet.

      • LIZ

        Wow, you took me on a walk! Surrounded by fallen leaves!! Beautiful! 💖

        • Teddy.15

          Awe, in America I know that the autumns are insanely beautiful 💖 thank you dear Liz ❤️

        • Pop64

          Simply beautiful is the imagery you've painted here with your words. Wonderful!!

          • Teddy.15

            Thank you so much dear pop64 it''s my favourite season of all. The colours are so diverse and each one tells its own story. 💖

          • MendedFences27

            "Glorious," may also describe your artwork and your poem. It was a most refreshing stroll through the woodland. Colors are amazing, bright, and beautiful. "Dancing shadows of leaves," "skeleton of the great oak," add life and vitality to your poem, Loved it. - Phil A.

            • Teddy.15

              So very proud of what you have said dear Phil, so much gratitude to you for enjoying this. Thank you dear friend. 💖

            • Neville


              its times like this I could kick myself for leafing you to be found by .. and then falling for another .. ❤️

              • Teddy.15

                LoL fill your boots my dear friend, I'll will always be a back up! ❤️

              • Bella Shepard

                Your beautiful words have increased my anticipation of Autumn 10 fold. This poem is so rich in the colors and wonder of it all. Perfect pic. Thank you dear Teddy!

                • Teddy.15

                  Hello my dear Bella, thank you so much, it's not difficult to find inspiration in Tuscany although for now we are still very much in summers grasp I'm waiting patiently to see it. ❤️

                • Sunsetmet

                  I just love this the colors go beyond anything so nicely written. I was in Florence Italy beautiful there I love Italy

                  • Teddy.15

                    Ah there's so much beauty in Florence especially in autumn as we always most certainly have the sun too a magnificent sky and I feel truly lucky to see it every evening. Thank you ❤️



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