[haiku chain evening shadows]
evening shadows
linger until sunset fades
brushes strokes of black
orange mist gathers
shares a party of nature
amber lights twinkle
light breeze blows gently
reeds sway to hush of whispers
birds chirp quietly
ground is a marshland
feet soak in water and weeds
unsteady quagmire
mottled colors bleed
rains on blotchy canvas scene
captured splash of time
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Author:
Summersounds68 (
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Comments3
Imagery is perfect as is the format of the haiku, nice write!
Michael, thank you for your lovely comment.
Absolutely beautifully composed haiku's. The magic of syllable and imagery has come to life in all of these. One of my favourite poetic forms most enjoyed. 🤗
Teddy.15, thank you sincerely for your uplifting comment. ~ Sonia
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