Once a Genuine Smile
Turning into a Dreadful one
What might be the Reason
Going through Her conception
Driving herself to the Cruel World
Letting her Drown into an unknown mess
Overwhelmed feelings
Have Deepen into the Soul
The Tears won't make it
To come out of the Zone
What's this Feeling
When will it End
No one has got the answer
To make her Soul at ease
Never know when
The once Genuine Smile
Will take it's Pace
To be the Self
When once was Embraced
Just Hoping
For that One day to come
Again as if
Everything will be Done
To be the one
When she used to be Fun
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Author:
illusions (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I wrote this poem when everything around me was falling apart . There was no hope to walk on. The downfall period was long enough that I completely forgot what enjoying the life was. This poem carries a memory of my heavy days and I was still standing. This is my first time on this website. Please read my poems and comment whatever you feel about it. I welcome all of your thoughts and comments.
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My comments on the poem "Long lost smile” by illusions
The poetess asks herself the reason for her change from a smiling mood to a negative one. The words “driving herself” might imply that the poetess herself is responsible for the situation. Note the words “cruel world.” Thus, she must have been facing obstacles for some time. Crying does not seem to help. She is clearly seeking a solution for the problem. “When will it end” : she wants the misery to end. She points out that she was jovial in the past. She ends with an optimistic wish that all will work out for the better.
Do keep up your spirits, friend. Best wishes. Keep posting on this site. Soman Ragavan. 10 September, 2023. Website : www.somanragavan.org //
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