Another Perfect Day
Tell me darling,
are we okay ..
Yes, of course,
she replied,
we are perfect ..
What could be
better than this ..
Sipping cold
beers on some
remote
desert island
and all without
Wi-Fi or
internet access ..
While we
fine dine upon
green figs
and these tiny
black olives ..
Not to mention
us watching
the fishermen
mending
their nets and
fighting off
all of the gulls ..
Then there’s
me of course,
catching
an occasional
whiff from
a perfect grey
smoke ring ..
As it rises from
one of your
rare gauloises bleus ..
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Author:
Neville (
Offline) - Published: September 11th, 2023 02:04
- Comment from author about the poem: Please don't spoil it .. by being gentle, she said .. 🤍
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Comments5
Good write N.
Not them figs again - oohh, I can't have figs myself. lol.
Can ya beat a gauloise thingy?!
It's been a long time, but I don't think so .. not even a Marlboro came close ..
Sounds delightful!! Don't spoil it! 😉Perfect indeed! 💜
.................. Cheers LIZ 💜
life's at its most resplendent
when anchored
in our everyday hassles aside grim
cloudy clouds
see, that's when the efficacy
of our smoke rings
chime a Time of veracity, in our
intentions and shared
amiably mundane, undefined serenity
(just love the ambience of this poem Hyung
it puts a flavour of a sharp margarita
in our tongues)
a delightful sip, in a read
What could possibly be better than that .. thank you brother Mek .. Neville
What ? she wanted rough - was this a message to me or you? She spoilt it when she suggested there might be a crack there. Still, "There is a crack, a crack in everything. That's how the light gets in."
Smoked Gauloises bleus but never achieved perfect smoke rings.....
its all in the relationship & action between the tongue and the cheeks that ultimately determines the symmetry .. and of course practice makes perfect .. cheers
Do I detect a playful smile on her lips, as she rcounts the delights of Another Perfect Day ? But then I suppose, it's the male way. I think you smiled as well, it was that obvious. Good write!
I'm afraid I still am .. and believe me, your visit helped .. thanks Bella .. Neville
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