Heavenly trial

evenwheniLie

 

 

 

 

…….Once shot in the head, I instantly appeared before my maker, the great contemplator; couldn’t tell it’s gender because there was just splendor and pure light. I could hear it telepathically in my own voice, with a omniscience reasoning I knew wasn’t mines, a scary magnificence but yet I was compelled to stay calm, asked me why I cursed the name told to me was divine, I said because I know you existed before names was spoken, and your children tell lies, they wear names as a disguise, we’ve had many men don those names as they rise, even the Bible has more of our fingerprints than God’s; it was than I felt it’s consciousness brush up against mines, it told me I was wise, but disconnected, most of your points will be deflected, into the abyss of human rigidity, the usual bases of our overall stupidity.

 

 

 

  • Author: EvenwheniLie (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 11th, 2023 02:04
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  • L. B. Mek

    'even the Bible has more of our fingerprints than God’s'
    the saddest part
    is that it was 'many differing' fingerprints
    so in chapter
    you have an all compassionate empathy God
    then in Psalms, its a God of weaponry
    demolish my enemies, kill my hater
    ..
    excuse me, what logic is this
    the same God that counts all
    as His children
    is now going to wipe a whole tribe out
    because the other side prayed more?
    same in other religions
    Jews have humanity's fist superhero
    a Golem, a Titan, a Defender
    that only protects Jews...
    hmmm
    and Muslims, scream 'by God's will'
    as they press that anti aircraft missile..
    ermmm, well what about the poor pilot
    where's God's will, then?
    so you see
    what ever avenue to faith, we had
    was corrupted from its very foundation
    and yet
    ask a 3 year old, they will tell you of Love
    as a God, of a truth as good
    but in ten years, they'll have forgotten
    their answers...
    such is the curse of fallibility we inherit in every generation..
    (I so relate, dear Poet)

  • Doggerel Dave

    I really find it hard to understand what gives in folks with religious beliefs.....

    • evenwheniLie

      Lol, their beliefs comforts them



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