Three-Fourths Time

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  Teddy.15 September 12th, 2023 10:43

  Wow, kudos and it did in fact feel just like a waltz, and I'd come back any day for a dance like this. 💖

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    sorenbarrettSeptember 12th, 2023 12:09

    Thanks Teddy for the read and kind words. I appreciate the encouragement.

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  Doggerel Dave September 12th, 2023 19:07

  Experimental poetry?....well it felt experimental to a traditional plodder like me - and non the worse for that, Soren. Tripped through it lightly.

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    sorenbarrettSeptember 12th, 2023 19:13

    Yep experimental indeed. I heard the waltz and thought poetry and music have meters so why not take the meter from the waltz and put it to poetry. Three syllables to a line just like three beats to a measure. It seemed more of a challenge than I bargained for since three syllables is not much for a line. Thanks for the read

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  L. B. Mek September 15th, 2023 04:51

  Brilliant interpretation
  Distilling the essence of this scene
  while keeping to a rhythmic flow
  of entwined heart's
  embraced, in the dance of life
  counting, to get that timing right
  to insure they're forever, in-step
  with each other's desires...
  (this song still get me as well)
  thank you oh wise Poet
  (I read and learn)

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    sorenbarrettSeptember 15th, 2023 05:46

    Thanks L.B. just another experiment along the way. I appreciate your most kind words.