Shadow Dance
Even though clearly we
don’t have
enough ink between
the two of us ..
Can you imagine for
a moment
the dance our tattoo’s
might have made,
as we make love with
the sun pinned
to the turquoise sky,
somewhere behind us ..
And can you,
envisage the dark
of our silhouette’s ..
As they cast freely their
individual shadows
and every single one
of them, is laughing out loud ..
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KP has a piercing - never seen it though we been married 5 million years. I would never recover if I saw it, never be quite right again! lol.
you need to get a life, go check it out and do both you and that figment of your imagination, a favour
KP and my marriage is a figment. lol.
Oh no, I wouldn't even want to imagine where you pierced I do hope it's your ear my dear. 🤣 oh so very romantic Sir Nev. I bow to thee. 💓
you won't catch it down there gall .. get up, that's my motto and let's take a look at ya .. ❤️
Ummmmm where........nah....I won't even ask. But this is beautiful!!! And I can feel your heart! You paint it so well, I can see it. 💜
a true gentleman never tells anyway .. but always say's a proper big thank you where necessary ..
THANK YOU profoundly LIZ 💜
And this is why I respect you! 💜
Your words describe an artful beauty of unity. Quite visual and simply lovely.
Thank you Michael .. very much appreciated sir .. Neville
This has the aesthetic of a Georges Méliès movie-I specially was enchanted by the ‘sun pinned on the turquoise sky’ -the implicit meaning of sharing ink in (tattoos)-very imaginative and impressive, this one, Neville
Your insight could be the death of me yet .. many serious thank you's Parisab .. Neville
LOL-‘Long live sir Neville’, I cheer!
So, laughing tatoos is a creative image, as is this entire poem. Just think of the possibilities if we could animate our tatoos. A great whimsical read for me today. Thanks - Phil A.
.. it seems there is a pattern forming .. bless you Phil .. tat oo very much sir 🙂
no tattoos or piercings yet for me
but when 'she' arrives
she can ink me like a blank canvas..
in hope we entrust
dear Poet supreme
(a most soothing read)
.. your words above read like the application of a soothing balm .. mid storm, before the calm .. and muchly needed .. thank you
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