Way down deep
in the very bottom
of my heart
there is a violin
playing
erratically.
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Author:
Teddy.15 (
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- Category: Reflection
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- Users favorite of this poem: LIZ, aDarkerMind, Introverted Sage, L. B. Mek
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Comments7
Is it screeching or playing melodically?! lol.
Good morning orchidear, Definately screeching dreadfully 🤣 ere can't you hear it then?
The violin is one of those instruments that....with the right notes, can really take us through an emotional musical ride!! I love this, and the picture! 💖💖💖
Thank you dear Liz, so very happy you have enjoyed this. ❤️
its tiny but beutiful
love the photo
Yet I feel it sing & so beautifully ❤️
So very kind of you, to always see the brighter side of teddy. ❤️
You chose the violin for this write, not a guitar, oboe or standing bass, but that which can truly define the intention of your write. I can picture, rather hear to sound, no defined melody, but yet a captivating cacophony of sound. Splendid write.
No defined melody, exactly quite rough and not a sound I like , such an eye and ear dear pop64 thank you dear friend. 💖
The violin is the only instrument that can cry. As a soul mate you have to treat it gently. Playing erratically, it's possibly Paganini. Oh well enjoy the music. Lovely short poem. - Phil A.
Yes, yes, yes, thank you so much Phil. 💖 screeching crying agony. Drama drama LoL 🤣 you made my day Sir.
'erratically'
simply Brilliant dear Poet
I so relate..
and what an image, that's
breathtakingly, heartbreakingly
beautiful
Aw, thank you my dear Mek such a beautiful review 💖 next time you are listening to really out of tune music you will think of teddy! 💖 LoL 🤣
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