Violin Strings

Teddy.15

 

Way down deep

in the very bottom

of my heart

there is a violin

playing

erratically.

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  • orchidee

    Is it screeching or playing melodically?! lol.

    • Teddy.15

      Good morning orchidear, Definately screeching dreadfully 🤣 ere can't you hear it then?

    • LIZ

      The violin is one of those instruments that....with the right notes, can really take us through an emotional musical ride!! I love this, and the picture! 💖💖💖

      • Teddy.15

        Thank you dear Liz, so very happy you have enjoyed this. ❤️

      • Moon_child

        its tiny but beutiful
        love the photo

      • Neville



        Yet I feel it sing & so beautifully ❤️

        • Teddy.15

          So very kind of you, to always see the brighter side of teddy. ❤️

        • Pop64

          You chose the violin for this write, not a guitar, oboe or standing bass, but that which can truly define the intention of your write. I can picture, rather hear to sound, no defined melody, but yet a captivating cacophony of sound. Splendid write.

          • Teddy.15

            No defined melody, exactly quite rough and not a sound I like , such an eye and ear dear pop64 thank you dear friend. 💖

          • MendedFences27

            The violin is the only instrument that can cry. As a soul mate you have to treat it gently. Playing erratically, it's possibly Paganini. Oh well enjoy the music. Lovely short poem. - Phil A.

            • Teddy.15

              Yes, yes, yes, thank you so much Phil. 💖 screeching crying agony. Drama drama LoL 🤣 you made my day Sir.

            • L. B. Mek

              'erratically'
              simply Brilliant dear Poet
              I so relate..
              and what an image, that's
              breathtakingly, heartbreakingly
              beautiful

              • Teddy.15

                Aw, thank you my dear Mek such a beautiful review 💖 next time you are listening to really out of tune music you will think of teddy! 💖 LoL 🤣



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