All in all I've lost 3 stones
But I'm not quite skin and bones
They're all looking and they hone
On the girl with a fat ass heart
No one can fathom what she's been through
No matter how hard you try to
She's quiet, that should give you a clue
About the girl that can give you a start
The girl is on fire as she walks to you
Red dress, red heels she's got on too
Ever the temptress, you've got this fool!
And your girl has got you feeling divine
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Author:
Christina (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: September 14th, 2023 14:05
- Comment from author about the poem: I couldn't come up with a 4th stanza! Thanks to peto for inspiration to write again.
- Category: Fantasy
- Views: 8
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Comments3
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Welcome back Christina
And with a belter
Missed your writing
A star is reborn
Oh, you! Thank you for inspiring me to write, and in your fashion. I don't quite think I'm a star, but I surely will try to write more poems! Thanks again!
Welcome back Christina, you've been missed,
You're a very talented writer my friend,
How's your hubby
Thank you! Hubby's good too. Thanks for stopping by!! 🙂
Your very welcome, any more getaways planned, last we talked is when you went to New Orleans a while back
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lol this a fun one, all us women want to put on that tight red dress and heels and work it, I do for sure. 💖
Hi Teddy, thanks for your kind review. I am not yet confident to put on that tight red dress but I will be soon. Thanks again!
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