Snow balanced perfect on leaves
Reflecting mirrors on frozen seas
Snowflakes fall so effortlessly
On the night that I come to you
Dazzling Christmas lights drape
Through houses they’ll stay on late
Illuminate’s our strolling date
On the night that I come to you
Inhale such crisp content Winters breeze
Hold hands with a tight territorial squeeze
Under mistletoe you kiss my nose to tease
This beautiful night will come true
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Miss M S Smith (Pseudonym) (
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Such a lovely feel to your words .. soft gentle writing liked reading this 🙂
Thank you so much violet, appreciate your visit.
How beautiful Maxine, I pray that this trip proves to be all this and so much more!!
Seems to be the start of a beautiful life together,
Thanks so much Melisa, such positive vibes, I like it.
Always!!!
Oh yes a Christmas treat, so beautifully written.that mistletoe will have a lot of action I'm sure. You brought some welcome snow to my mind as it's still 35c my way. 🌲 💖
Where are you from Teddy?
Winter the season for me, all the cosy dark cool nights, I can’t wait.
I'm in Florence Italy
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It remains me of the forests,the lakes,dawns and twilight of Canada ,dressed in majestic coldness..
Sounds perfect, much appreciate your time here.
There is something very special about all that winter brings, and you've captured the ambiance beautifully in this poem. As I read I'm dreamning of walks in the snow, cozy winter coats and all the Christmases I cherish. Thank you for this lovely Sunday morning feeling!
So glad to see you back here and very happy to oblige 🌲 ❄️
Words are magic and dreams can come true! Lovely write!
So very true, thank you for your read Ruby ☺️
I love the month of December with birthdays and Christmas. You have effortlessly captured "December" in this awesome poem!! Great job!
Thank you so much Christina, it’s so lovely having you back ☺️
The cadence falls as gently as the snowflakes, and kisses the reader on the nose so softly
A wonderful comment which captures the essence of the poem.
Thank you so much
How magical!!!! I'm not ready for winter though!!! LOL 😘😘😘 beautiful Maxine!!!!
Haha but there are so many ways we could take our writing in the winter ….. may the words flow on our next collab 😆🤣
🤣🤣🤣🤣 I got you!!! And ummmmmmm YESSSS!! Mmmmm winter nights 🌙 🤔
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Beautiful words Maxine but as Orchi will tell you I do not lie to hear the C word before December. 😂🤣😂.
Andy
Hahaha well even though it has the C word in December. It is the weather and the long nights I love it for.
Thanks so much for stopping by Andy
beautiful imagery
makes me wish it was snowing already
lol
thank you! dear Poet
Hahaha I cannot wait, bring on the snow ❄️
Thank you for the read Mek
The imagery you provide to us all is simply gorgeous, while the flow of the read pulls us deeper in. Beautiful writing!!
Thank you so much Michael, so happy you enjoyed it
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