Tropical interlude

Lorenz

Distant dunes to heart,

in search of close  shores,

sunset make me hurt ,

secret  taboo doors ...

once upon atoll,

shipwreck, the call...

space tropicorn lagoon,

spice lolita moon ...

Vanilla hours,deep vertigo,

  archipelago feelings mango...

 Primal forest  long mystery,

suave salted night story,

desire pottering along

the ruby flavour of  dreams,

far away  Bora Bora song ,

ukelele  melody,

lasting melancholy 

of our summer whims...

 

 

  • Author: lorenz (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 22nd, 2023 03:42
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • L. B. Mek

    love the wording/wordplay
    this is wonderful to read out loud
    'in search of close shores,
    sunset make me hurt ,
    secret taboo doors ...
    once upon atoll,
    shipwreck, the call...
    space tropicorn lagoon,
    spice lolita moon ...
    Vanilla hours,deep vertigo,
    archipelago feelings mango..'
    thank you! dear Poet
    great poetic ambition
    subtle in execution
    a lovely read

    • Lorenz

      Thanks dear friend .All I had to do was to draw on a few vanilla memories !

    • Pop64

      Your use of imagery through choice of words and careful subtle inferences, leave the reader to experience all that is within the write, to be there. Lovely

      • Lorenz

        Its funny to think that English is not mat mother language but its lexical richness is like the waves of the ocean !



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