In the race to survive
To make millions and thrive
Like ants, we do scurry
Always in a hurry
There is no time for family
Though time, we find, for friends
There’s time to join the rat race
And follow the latest trends
What good will it do
If tomorrow you will rue
The time that flew so fast
That present turned to past
Value the people you love
Show them that you care
Ask them what they need
Ask them how they fare
Your family is the root
Of which you are the fruit
So never leave the hand
That raised you in this land
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safina (Pseudonym) (
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I liked rhyme in this one
thanks a ton. have a good day
Correct.
glad you agree . take care.
Yes yes yes!!! Staying present!!! Loving your people! Life is too precious and short!! Loved it!! 💚
Thanks a ton for such a positive feedback. May you always be surrounded by loving family/friends
take care
A great message poem didactic and expressed in superb rhyming. Kudos!!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
Can you see my comment now? I can see it.
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