Life
Trace my deep footsteps
Search for friendship earned
Nimbly surf the twists
Deftly slide the turns
Treasure all you learn
Almost certain
Paths uncertain
Visit hurting
Days you feel burned
Life resounds
Paths profound
Gold is found
Madly
Gladly
Live
Bobby O
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Author:
Bobby O (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Formatted poem 5 stanzas as such 5lines 5 syllable each line 4lines 4 Syll 3lines 3syll 2 lines 2 1 line 1 It was tricky but I was challenged
- Category: Reflection
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Laborious but delicate in structure and deep in connection-great that you shared
You are way cool
Hope you also share thoughts on the one from yesterday? Mix not….
Wouldn’t miss it, I thought about you when I published Sunday Morning With Miss Etta James, this morning-I didn’t until today that she was a Los Angeles native all these years I adored her music
I’d rather go blind than miss it. Finding it now.
The phrase "trace my deep footsteps" is a truly inspired line... many of us leave barely a trace... deep footprints indicate a life fully lived...
Thank you for excellent insight. You jumped into my mind cuz that was exact !
you are a braver man than me sir .. much braver .. 🎵🎶👍
right on!
amazing poem
Full of emotion. Well crafted.
Very cool words. Appreciate how you jump in and lend support. That shows a good heart
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