Poem : 'Motherland (3)' ; 1 April, 2023.

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Poem “Motherland (3)”

Soman Ragavan : Hello. Can I post a poem of mine for analysis, please ?

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Hello Soman Ragavan! Of course, you can post your poem here for analysis. I'd be happy to take a look at it and offer my thoughts.
 
Soman Ragavan : My poem : "Motherland (3)." Please analyse by each stanza, then give overall comments. Mention similar poems from other authors, where possible. MOTHERLAND (3).

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Sure, Soman Ragavan! Here is my analysis of your poem "Motherland (3)" stanza by stanza, followed by overall comments:

Stanza 1: The opening stanza presents a bleak and desolate image of torn flags and convulsed cables from trees, which are symbols of decay and destruction. The swarm of flies on dead dogs is a metaphor for the decay and filth that pervades the environment, and the jets of water from ruptured pipes symbolize the wastage and neglect of resources. The use of the word "piteously" adds to the tone of sadness and despair.

Stanza 2: The second stanza highlights the chaos and noise pollution that is rampant in the environment, with telephones ringing unanswered and overloaded buses groaning with engines. The imagery of "escaping murder on a zebra crossing" is striking and conveys the sense of danger and vulnerability that people face in such a chaotic and disordered society.

Stanza 3: The third stanza focuses on the greed and dishonesty of sellers who hoard scarce foods and sell expired foods to the public without any shame. The defiance of selling fruits in forbidden units and tampering with expiry dates highlights the disregard for rules and regulations that is prevalent in the society.

Stanza 4: The fourth stanza portrays the inefficiency and neglect of public services, with timetables flouted, enquiries answered with grumbles, and roads rarely repaired. The sheer filth that litters many public places highlights the lack of basic sanitation and hygiene.

Stanza 5: The fifth stanza highlights the petty and trivial nature of people's concerns, with talk of a fictitious paradise and quarrelling over the most trivial matters. The image of people robbing other people's property in daylight adds to the sense of lawlessness and disorder in the society.

Stanza 6: The final stanza highlights the neglect of basic infrastructure, with blown street lights ignored for days and blown traffic lights replaced belatedly. The image of careening through built-up areas adds to the sense of danger and recklessness that pervades the society. The stanza ends with a somber reflection on the state of society, with the speaker acknowledging that the survival of people in such a clime is amazing.

Overall comments: Your poem "Motherland (3)" presents a powerful and evocative picture of a society in decay and disarray. The use of vivid imagery and metaphors effectively conveys the sense of neglect, chaos, and lawlessness that pervades the society. The poem has a consistent and cohesive structure, with each stanza building on the previous one to create a cumulative effect. The use of repetition, such as in the phrases "always making, but rarely keeping" and "blown street lights," adds to the sense of despair and hopelessness.

In terms of similar poems from other authors, your poem shares some thematic similarities with works by poets such as Langston Hughes, who wrote about the struggles and injustices faced by African Americans in the early 20th century. For example, Hughes' poem "Harlem" similarly portrays a society that is decaying and unfulfilled, with the question "What happens to a dream deferred?" serving as a powerful metaphor for the consequences of neglect and oppression.

Overall, your poem "Motherland (3)" is a poignant and thought-provoking commentary on the state of society, and its vivid imagery and evocative language make it a powerful work of poetry.
 
Soman Ragavan : Thank you. Goodbye for now.

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You're welcome, Soman Ragavan. If you have any more questions or would like further analysis in the future, feel free to reach out. Goodbye for now!

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                                MOTHERLAND (3)

Torn flags in the wind piteously flapping;
Convuls'd cables from  trees dangling;
A swarm of flies on dead dogs rioting;
Jets of water from ruptur'd pipes leaping.

Telephones ringing and nobody answering;
All places with maddening noise polluting;
Overload'd buses with engines groaning;
Escaping murder on a zebra crossing.

Sellers scarce foods without shame hoarding;
Expir'd foods impudently to the public selling;
Fruits in forbidden units defiantly retailing;
With expiry dates criminally tampering.

Flouting timetables from morning till evening;
Enquiries, questions with grumbles answering;
Roads always carving up and rarely repairing;
Many public places with sheer filth littering.

About some fictitious paradise forever raving;
Other people's property in daylight robbing;
Promises always making, but rarely keeping;
About the most trivial matters quarrelling.

Blown street lights for days ignoring;
Good street lights in daylight shining;
Blown traffic lights belat'dly replacing;
Through built-up areas careering.

About the most stupid things haggling;
Hardly about anything really learning;
In gossip and rumours always indulging;
Our very survival in this clime be amazing.
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