This brain fog
a black smog
obscuring, abducting
my clarity
A deep trench
a brown bog
dilating, expanding
my misery
Can't think straight
just lie awake
vibrating
with fabricated harmony
This black smog
a deep fog
a light just in view...
my remedy
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Author:
Orions pen (
Offline) - Published: September 26th, 2023 17:37
- Category: Reflection
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Comments1
Your poem beautifully captures the struggle with mental fog and the longing for clarity. The imagery of the black smog and deep fog conveys the weight of confusion and the journey toward finding light and remedy. Well done!
Thank you! I didn't expect anyone to see this, was a very nice surprise 🙂
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