Eyes have somewhat adjusted
Hands are almost in view
The air is dry and falling short
I’m thinking now of you
The immediate world is stifling
But you can set me free
Come seek, my love, find me here
Please come now and save me
Oh, bring me from this darkness
The air it now draws thin
My love, I’m still waiting here
A shallow grave I’m in
Like being buried, yet alive,
Are feelings I’ll know best
Until you come to save me, dear
Until love manifests
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Wow I felt all the emotions. Suffocating.....waiting on love's saving grace!! A little goth! Loved it!!
Goth is good LOL. Thank you!
Goth is great!!! 😁 Mystery!! 🌙 🌚
Such emotion in a very dignified poem. ❤️
Thank you so much for your kind words, Teddy!
A definite plea of desperation and urgency. Air is number one on the needed chart and I heard it here
I really appreciate it, thank you!
Lots of emotion in this poem and i like the rhyme and cadence! Awesome job!
You're too kind, thank you!
The rhyme pattern here is gorgeous, and the tone is beautifully excruciating Pop64, an excellently written piece here.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
I truly appreciate this, thank you!
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