she never did neither did I
sell myself for a low price
but what price
similiar to an antique chair
or am I a cheap coffee
drained in milk
or
silver details
handeled carefully
my soul
in a small package
send to foreign countrys
would I care?
-AH
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Author:
amysliterature (
Offline) - Published: September 27th, 2023 15:34
- Category: Sociopolitical
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Comments3
This has problems.Firstly the metaphors drown the meaning.Secondly there is no clear meaning
and since when does a poem need to have a meaning? why do YOU feel the right to tell me whats wrong with my poem? People like you make people like me afraid of sharing their passion and emotions because „the metaphors drown the meaning“. You do not need to mansplain poetry to me!
Keep sharing your literature Amy
I for one enjoy reading it
thank you very much 🙂
I would be happy to read into your words with a strong black coffee in a dirty mug in any country under the stars .. write on Amy .. and send my regards to your pen .. Neville
I would love that too!!
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