Ask One More Time

Daye Writes

Are you ok?

I'm good.

(i waited a few seconds)

Are you ok really?

Yeah, I'm fine

(i saw her eyes getting glassy)

You know I'm your friend, are you okay?

(Tears rolled down her cheeks, i embraced her and we held each other in that moment)

i asked one more time

Are you okay?

I am now, I really needed someone to ask just one more time.

  • Author: Baraka Daye (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 28th, 2023 04:56
  • Comment from author about the poem: True friendship is not something shallow like just the normal greetings and the normal conversations, true friendship is trying your best to listen to your friend's heart before their smile, the quite before the noise and their voice in a loud environment. Check in and check up.
  • Category: Friendship
  • Views: 13
  • User favorite of this poem: GenXer Shamrocker ☘️.
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Comments2

  • Teddy.15

    Such a simple question that can really change the day of a person. Are you ok? Today I'm very well thank you 💗 beautifully lined.

    • Daye Writes

      Very true...Ask one more time

      • Teddy.15

        How are you?

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      • GenXer Shamrocker ☘️

        A beautiful and much needed message! Thank you for sharing!



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