Are you ok?
I'm good.
(i waited a few seconds)
Are you ok really?
Yeah, I'm fine
(i saw her eyes getting glassy)
You know I'm your friend, are you okay?
(Tears rolled down her cheeks, i embraced her and we held each other in that moment)
i asked one more time
Are you okay?
I am now, I really needed someone to ask just one more time.
- Author: Baraka Jowi (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: September 28th, 2023 04:56
- Comment from author about the poem: True friendship is not something shallow like just the normal greetings and the normal conversations, true friendship is trying your best to listen to your friend's heart before their smile, the quite before the noise and their voice in a loud environment. Check in and check up.
- Category: Friendship
- Views: 13
- Users favorite of this poem: GenXer Shamrocker ☘️
Comments2
Such a simple question that can really change the day of a person. Are you ok? Today I'm very well thank you 💗 beautifully lined.
Very true...Ask one more time
How are you?
I'm good, what about you?
I'm really good thank you. ❤️
A beautiful and much needed message! Thank you for sharing!
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