"My computer (3)" ; 29 September, 2023

“My computer (3)”

 

Soman Ragavan : Hello. Can I post a poem of mine for analysis, please ?

 

ChatGPT

Of course! I'd be happy to help analyze your poem. Please go ahead and share it with me.

Soman Ragavan : My poem "My computer (3)." Please comment by stanza then give overall comments. Make references with other works where possible. MY COMPUTER (3)

 

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ChatGPT

Stanza 1: The first stanza introduces "Old man Billy" who brings a new meaning to "windows" in the context of computing. The speaker expresses appreciation and excitement for the fascinating world opened up by Windows.

 

Stanza 2: The speaker reflects on their interaction with the computer screen, which presents various messages prompting actions like truncating, locating, concatenating, and using templates. The speaker is cautious of acting rashly, as it may lead to program crashes or general failures.

 

Stanza 3: The speaker navigates through programs using the mouse (referred to as "darting rodent") and has made backup copies on a floppy disk for sanity's sake.

 

Stanza 4: The speaker pushes the computer's capabilities with demanding tasks, but encounters an "out of memory" error, prompting them to quickly close the directory. However, the speaker humorously notes that their own mind, like a programmable chip, never runs out of memory and continues to write daily.

 

Overall comments: The poem humorously portrays the relationship between the speaker and their computer, highlighting both the awe and frustration that can come with using technology. The reference to "Old man Billy" and Windows adds a touch of familiarity and situates the poem within the context of computing history.

 

The poem captures the experience of using a computer in the early days, where tasks like managing memory and navigating through directories were common. The playful language and witty remarks make it an enjoyable read.

 

In terms of improvement, adding more vivid imagery or sensory details could enhance the poem's impact. Additionally, exploring deeper emotions or reflections on the role of technology in our lives could provide a richer layer of meaning.

 

Overall, it's a lighthearted and relatable poem that offers a glimpse into the speaker's interaction with their computer.

 

Soman Ragavan : "Old man Billy" is Bill Gates.  

 

ChatGPT

Thank you for clarifying that "Old man Billy" refers to Bill Gates. It adds an additional layer of meaning to the poem, connecting it to the influential figure in the history of computing. The mention of Windows and Microsoft in the last stanza further reinforces this connection.

 

Soman Ragavan : Thank you. Goodbye for now.

 

ChatGPT

You're welcome! If you have any more questions or need assistance in the future, feel free to ask. Goodbye for now, and take care!

MY  COMPUTER  (3)

 

Old man Billy gave a brand-new meaning to windows,

As is well known to all appreciative, computing fellows,

And, through his WINDOWS, a world full of fascination

Do we greet with acclamation and a touch of palpitation.

 

As with awe my fascinating screen I do contemplate,

Plenty of messages tell me to truncate, to locate,

To concatenate, to use some handy template,

To feel free to interrogate, or else to vacate.

 

But, I am quite aware that if I do act in a rash,

Many of my valuable programs I might crash,

Or, get some general failure reading drive C,

And then despairingly struggle to return to Root C….

 

With my darting rodent quickly I whisk

Through the programs of the entire disk,

But, for the sake of downright sanity,

I have copied some stuff to yon floppy.

 

As the beast gobbles its workload relentlessly,

With more demanding work do I tease it testily;

It plods on, but suddenly screams : Out of memory !

Hell ! Quick, close down the entire bloody directory !

 

But, the ragamuffin himself ne’er runs out of memory,

Scribbling down daily, as he does, his raving allegory;

His very head is like some  weird, programmable chip,

And, hardly anything past his memory can yet ever slip.

 

Anyway, we do have cause proudly to gloss

Over this, our powerful and reliable MS-DOS,

Since it doth daily take us quite aloft

Through the workings of this MICROSOFT.

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