SOON MY GRANDCHILDREN MOVE AWAY

nephilim56

I will miss you even before you go
Each breath you take I will share
And everything you see
I will see through your eyes.

Not even sleep shall part us
For I will share your dreams.
When the warm sun bathes you
Or the icy wind chills you
I will feel that too
For I love you
Dear children
More than anything can say.

As I turn off the last light
I will think of you
When I awake my first thought
Will be of you
For I love you both so much
Dear grandchildren.

  • Author: nephilim56 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 30th, 2023 04:22
  • Comment from author about the poem: Written years ago when my grandkids were small and moved to the other end of the country
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 9
  • Users favorite of this poem: Weep little lion girl, Teddy.15
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  • Weep little lion girl

    I am very close with my siblings as I helped raise them closely and even refer to them as my own children. They recently moved far away so this poem resonated with me a lot.
    Also, it is stunningly written, you are very talented, and I love your style! 🙂

    • nephilim56

      thank you so much for your kind words, its a first draft that was written with pure emotion and I didnt want to tinker with it

    • Teddy.15

      May every grandchild in the world have a letter like this. ❤️

      • nephilim56

        you sum it up perfectly thank you

      • Christina8

        i agree with Teddy on this....but I'm glad you went with a lighter, more positive poem, where a lot of people might go towards the negative. Awesome!

        • nephilim56

          many thanks, much appreciated



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