I will miss you even before you go
Each breath you take I will share
And everything you see
I will see through your eyes.
Not even sleep shall part us
For I will share your dreams.
When the warm sun bathes you
Or the icy wind chills you
I will feel that too
For I love you
Dear children
More than anything can say.
As I turn off the last light
I will think of you
When I awake my first thought
Will be of you
For I love you both so much
Dear grandchildren.
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Author:
nephilim56 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Written years ago when my grandkids were small and moved to the other end of the country
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Comments3
I am very close with my siblings as I helped raise them closely and even refer to them as my own children. They recently moved far away so this poem resonated with me a lot.
Also, it is stunningly written, you are very talented, and I love your style! 🙂
thank you so much for your kind words, its a first draft that was written with pure emotion and I didnt want to tinker with it
May every grandchild in the world have a letter like this. ❤️
you sum it up perfectly thank you
i agree with Teddy on this....but I'm glad you went with a lighter, more positive poem, where a lot of people might go towards the negative. Awesome!
many thanks, much appreciated
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