An ode to a green-eyed doe

drpreetshah

A single glance into her gleaming eyes, Was enough to take me on journey to paradise 

 

She's gifted with irises that bear a lushful
green,
That compliment her cheeks, which are ever so sanguine

 

Her oculi shroud many a mystery,
Her sharp gaze, being ever so incendiary

 

When the rage flares akin to an inferno, Only the running of her velvety hands across my face can defuse the storm in a go


She may be miles away from me, as if in another portal,
But the effect she has on me, can be matched by no other mortal

  • Author: drpreetshah (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 1st, 2023 18:40
  • Comment from author about the poem: This poem is dedicated to a special green-eyed maiden who dwells in my imagination
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 1
  • Users favorite of this poem: Soman Ragavan
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  • Soman Ragavan


    My comments on the poem "An ode to a green-eyed doe” by drpreetshah

    Even if you did not mention "dr" in your name, there are hints that you are in medicine : “irises, oculi.” However, it is unusual for a doctor to speak of : "flares akin to an inferno" ; "defuse the storm," ‘incendiary.” "Portal" shows a scientific mind.
    Can you guess my zodiac sign ?...
    Soman Ragavan. 2 October, 2023. //
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  • L. B. Mek

    beautiful imagery
    a wonderful read
    thanks for sharing



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