A single glance into her gleaming eyes, Was enough to take me on journey to paradise
She's gifted with irises that bear a lushful
green,
That compliment her cheeks, which are ever so sanguine
Her oculi shroud many a mystery,
Her sharp gaze, being ever so incendiary
When the rage flares akin to an inferno, Only the running of her velvety hands across my face can defuse the storm in a go
She may be miles away from me, as if in another portal,
But the effect she has on me, can be matched by no other mortal
-
Author:
drpreetshah (
Offline) - Published: October 1st, 2023 18:40
- Comment from author about the poem: This poem is dedicated to a special green-eyed maiden who dwells in my imagination
- Category: Love
- Views: 1
- User favorite of this poem: Soman Ragavan.
Offline)
Comments2
My comments on the poem "An ode to a green-eyed doe” by drpreetshah
Even if you did not mention "dr" in your name, there are hints that you are in medicine : “irises, oculi.” However, it is unusual for a doctor to speak of : "flares akin to an inferno" ; "defuse the storm," ‘incendiary.” "Portal" shows a scientific mind.
Can you guess my zodiac sign ?...
Soman Ragavan. 2 October, 2023. //
---------------
beautiful imagery
a wonderful read
thanks for sharing
To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.