It's a twisted game we play
I know you has a boyfriend, but
Does he make you feel like I do?
Does he know how to calm you down?
Does he make you feel loved and much more?
I know I should stay away, but
You tease me
And hug me
And call me "dear" in a certain voice
A voice that makes me fall in love with you all the more every second
I am a puppet
And you hold the strings to my heart
My heart, soul, and body are all yours
I play this twisted game
As you lure me into a trap
But I do not care
- Author: My funny valentine (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: October 2nd, 2023 09:23
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 1
Comments1
I can really empathize with this piece, as it returns me to my younger (teen) days. It is a very good write, well conveyed meaning. My only suggestion would be to change, "I know she has a boyfriend, but" to "I know you have a boyfriend, but", but otherwise a terrific write.
Thank you, and your suggestion is very much appreciated I will indeed change it to that as it makes far more sense thank you
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