Lost promise
In the echoes of vows, a promise once made,
Lost in the whispers, in time's silent cascade.
A pledge, like petals, once vibrant and bold,
Now scattered, forgotten, in memories untold.
Promises danced in the moonlit embrace,
Now shadows linger, leaving an empty space.
A commitment like a delicate thread unwinds,
Lost promise, a melody fading in the winds.
Yet, in the remnants of what used to be,
Hope whispers softly, a chance to set it free.
Lost promises, like stars that dim in the night,
Seek a revival, a rekindling of their light.
In the tapestry of time, a stitch may find,
The lost promise, a treasure to unbind.
- Author: Chiki (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: October 5th, 2023 00:51
- Category: Sad
- Views: 0
Comments1
This has such a smooth flow to the read and while containing a subject of what appears to be lost love or the breaking of promises, I still recognize the chance of hope at the end. Beautiful
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