Luck

sorenbarrett

A've been ta da gallows many a times

'ad da rope about ma neck

'ad it tightened for ma crimes

but da drop d'ey did check

 

Other times da rope broke

or da trap wouldn't open

Close enough for me ta choke

an even ta stop a hope'n

 

But it seems dat I always got's another chance

There's dose dat say ah's gots a lot a pluck

When da judge says ah's got's ta dance

Ah depends upon ma luck

  • Author: sorenbarrett (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 8th, 2023 05:23
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  • L. B. Mek

    lol
    no idea what accent you were trying to utilise
    (pirates?)
    such a fun read
    thank you! dear Poet

    • sorenbarrett

      Live and learn friend the accent was an attempt at a person I once knew who was overly reckless putting him in jail numerous times. But as it is highly unique most people don't relate. I think in the future I'll stick more to the mainstream. Thanks so much for the review.

      • L. B. Mek

        no my friend, have fun with it
        let your creativity's ink
        take you to differing brooks and rivers
        that's how we make this journey fun
        or else it's just a dumpster truck
        of constant emotionality and eye watering
        editing..
        have fun with it my friend
        don't be discouraged, let poesy embolden
        and empower you, never limit or restrict
        keep those mighty qwerty keys dancing
        (i was just teasing a little, about pirates
        forgive me)



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