A've been ta da gallows many a times
'ad da rope about ma neck
'ad it tightened for ma crimes
but da drop d'ey did check
Other times da rope broke
or da trap wouldn't open
Close enough for me ta choke
an even ta stop a hope'n
But it seems dat I always got's another chance
There's dose dat say ah's gots a lot a pluck
When da judge says ah's got's ta dance
Ah depends upon ma luck
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sorenbarrett (
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Comments1
lol
no idea what accent you were trying to utilise
(pirates?)
such a fun read
thank you! dear Poet
Live and learn friend the accent was an attempt at a person I once knew who was overly reckless putting him in jail numerous times. But as it is highly unique most people don't relate. I think in the future I'll stick more to the mainstream. Thanks so much for the review.
no my friend, have fun with it
let your creativity's ink
take you to differing brooks and rivers
that's how we make this journey fun
or else it's just a dumpster truck
of constant emotionality and eye watering
editing..
have fun with it my friend
don't be discouraged, let poesy embolden
and empower you, never limit or restrict
keep those mighty qwerty keys dancing
(i was just teasing a little, about pirates
forgive me)
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