Autumn is about to end
leaves of my soul turned to yellow , brown and fell
you are not around anymore..
i'll wait for you no matter how many autumns will pass
like a star; far away i'll be shining always there i confess..
i'll wait till i decay
in my grave i'll lay
for your peace i'll pray
sky turned to gray
blood turning blue
told you i'll die waiting for you.
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Author:
MrsD (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: October 13th, 2023 14:25
- Comment from author about the poem: i hope your soul leaves stay forever green.
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Comments5
The meaning of this poem is deep. Great choice of words as well. It spoke to me. Favorite line : "for your peace i'll pray".
i am so grateful...thanks a lot ..and i really appreciated your words fr
Plenty more seasons on the way miss
Won't be long until everything is blooming again
Hang in there
And keep writing
Thank you so much for lighting my night whith your words (it's night here). i will !
Thank you so much for lighting my night whith your words (it's night here). i will !
I could feel your poem, beautiful ✨
thank you beautiful
Such devotion.
♥✉
Enjoyed the use of autumn to convey a sense of longing. Beautiful read!
Thank u so much ...really appreciated it
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