Spun

Introverted Sage

It's like a never ending wheel and I'm already dizzy.
More than enough on my plate has been keeping me busy.

Writhing inside how many more times can they twist me.
If I jumped off right now would it be too risky? 

Dizzy and can't seem to stand up straight.
Got a new peculiar bevel to my once laboured gait.
Biding my time learned patience had to wait. 
Time is of no meaning when you're spinning at that pace. 

So close your eyes and find your groove. 
Rocky at first then it gets smooth.
Never really had anything to prove. 
Judgement means nothing unless you've walked inside my shoes. 

~I.S.~

  • Author: Introverted Sage (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 15th, 2023 02:47
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments4

  • novaa

    'So close your eyes and find your groove.
    Rocky at first then it gets smooth.'......These lines convey a sense of hope and resilience. Enjoyed reading!

  • 2781

    Sounds like a bad ride, to me.

    • Introverted Sage

      oh.. you missed a part..

      'Rocky at first then it gets smooth.'

      'Then' being the keyword here

      It gets better 😏


      • 2781

        It would make me dizzy!

      • 4 more comments

      • peto

        I can't help but think this is work related
        " got a new peculiar bevel to my once laboured gait"
        Loved this line
        Great read

      • L. B. Mek

        did you have the munchies after..
        lol
        I'm with you dear Poet
        let those who can walk
        in other people's shoes
        throw the first stone
        everyone else
        mind your fckin business!
        lol
        purposed emotionality
        is our artistry's fuel

        • Introverted Sage

          Purposed emotionality is the best fuel. Learning to channel that into our art is the key.



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