Notice of absence from Gg_a_poet
Currently back in school in many extra curricular activity's I will try to make time to write love you
Currently back in school in many extra curricular activity's I will try to make time to write love you
When I first met you
I never thought id fall this hard
But when I look in your eyes
A spark ignites, A flame takes flight
A brand new love, Pure and bright
Like a whisper in the wind unseen
It sneaks up softly, Gentle and Serene
A love unexpected but true and rare
A love we'll cherish beyond compare
I didn't know from the start
That I would love you with all of my heart
-
Author:
GG (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: October 16th, 2023 07:36
- Category: Love
- Views: 7
Offline)
Comments3
Sometimes it's that unexpected, never looking for, love that turns out to be the greatest of them all, as evident in this write. Sounds like you got it bad. Beautiful write.
thank you. Im a 15 year old girl who writes poems to express myself in dark times and to maybe help other people with similar experiences. i want to get a message out to the world, and getting comments like this makes me more confident in my writeing so i thank you very much
Reminds one of a new and young love. Favorite lines: 'Like a whisper in the wind unseen
It sneaks up softly, Gentle and Serene'.....loved the metaphor
thank you
This is amazing I feel you too.
To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.