In the shadows of a heavy heart,
Where sorrow and pain tear apart,
A story of a love once so bright,
Now lost in the depths of endless night.
Tears like rain on a windowpane,
Silent cries in the pouring rain,
A love that bloomed, then slowly died,
Leaving scars that are hard to hide.
Promises made, but broken in two,
A love so deep, but misunderstood,
Hearts entwined, then torn asunder,
Leaving behind a world of thunder.
Memories linger, like a haunting song,
A love so right, but oh, so wrong,
In the ruins of what used to be,
A love that's lost to eternity.
So let the tears flow, like a river wide,
As we mourn a love that couldn't bide,
In the hush of night, we find release,
For a love that's gone, but will never cease.
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You summed this up in that lst line, love never ends, we can't just drop emotions, but it can cease. Beautifully expressed but a truly sad write.
I understand and thank you for your words 😊😊
Profound and beautiful depiction of sorrow and lost love......Very evocative....Nice write!
Thank you 🙏🙏
Beautiful work.
Ah so very beautiful I adore your rhyme it's so natural off the tongue, it's so sad when love disappoints us but their are more and even better ones on the way. LoL I'm a true fan of love and I say what doesn't kill us makes us stronger, you are 17? When I was 17 I found a love that was so awful and painful I then became a poetess. ❤️
Yes I'm 17
Thank for your words 🙏😊😊
Love is pain 💔
Do you know??
When god didn't achieve his love
Then who it's possible that we will achieve love 😘
In this world True 💝 love we can't find but it is possible
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