Sickly Crow

Mr. Not


Notice of absence from Mr. Not
I realized it's been a while since I was online. I hope everyone is doing well. I will probably not be logging on regularly now either, just decided to leave a notice. 06.01.2025


through filthy darkness
sand crawls
through glass of time

a pale face reflects
the passage of time
through the moon's shine

sickly crow claws
at a sad soul's heart
until the last of sand
falls to peace

_____   norwegian   _____

i luddert mørke
kravle sanda
gjennom glas av ti

et bleikt ansikt reflektere
tias løp
gjennom månens skin

sjukeli skjor sett kløra
i ei trist sjels brøst
te sandas siste fell te ro

  • Author: Mr. Not (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 16th, 2023 13:25
  • Comment from author about the poem: a tiny poem i finished today with the help of a friend. the crow is a magpie in the Norwegian(original) one because of convenience. the poem is not directly translated because of the use of local words that written Norwegian simply do not have nor use/use differently.
  • Category: Gothic
  • Views: 10
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  • Thomas W Case

    Great imagery.

    • Mr. Not

      Thank you, friend.



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