I can't be anymore open
Then I've already been
It really hurts inside my heart
Cause we were always friends
I held on, I held on with really so much hope
I always painted a picture of you so peaceful as my antidote
To shield me from the thunder and the pouring rain
To have you come and rescue me and release me from my pain
I've been in a relationship but never gave my heart
Cause every time I tried to, It was ripped apart
I held on, I held on cause you were my only hope
Just never shared the thoughts I have had
Cause we were on different roads
Now that he has gone and I'm ready for my boat
I'm sinking while I'm thinking, drowning with no float
I'm waiting to be rescued
For you to come and save me
But by then I'll be dead
Cause you don't even see me
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Author:
Katie (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Sometimes we put our faith in people that may never come to our rescue.
- Category: Sad
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Comments3
We all need a Saviour.
Nice read!
Powerful and poignant.
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