Friendship is the seed of love That grows in the soil of trust Watered by the rain of care And nurtured by the sun of respect
Love is the flower of friendship That blooms in the garden of joy Fragrant by the breeze of passion And adorned by the petals of loyalty
Friendship and love are intertwined They are the roots and the branches They are the melody and the harmony They are the boom boom of our hearts
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Shy silly soul (
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- Comment from author about the poem: It is about love............that starts from friendship u can say I am in that state only......hehe :)
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Hi everyone those who have been waiting for my poems I really appreciate them....thanks for being patient......So now I am finally healed but the wounds left the scars and scars take time to fade.....anyways back with a new content hope u like it 🙂
Excellent.
Thanku sir!
My comments on the poem "Love that starts from friendship” by Shy silly soul
“Friendship is the seed of love…” : friendship and love had better stay apart, for they are NOT the same, no matter how much we try to make them the same. Love ends up spoiling friendship.
“Love is the flower of friendship…” : again, friendship should not evolve into love, for love kills it off in the long run. It is unromantic, or cold or terrible to say so, but it is still the hard reality, as one will ultimately find.
“Friendship and love are intertwined…” : again, it is fatal for that to happen.
“they are the roots and branches…” : from the very start, the poetess has decided that love and friendship are the same or should be the same.
“Friendship can turn to love; love to friendship --- never.”
“Truth is always bitter.”
--From the Indian television serial : “Kyunki saas bi khabi bahu thi” (“For the mother-in-law was once a daughter-in-law”). (Full acknowledgements are made to the rights-holders)
Thus, friendship can evolve into love. It is free to do so. It often happens that way. But, after love, after love has failed, there cannot be friendship. There will be utter hatred, vengeance…. Big battle… Divorce…
These words will be disturbing, they will be rejected, but they are still the hard truth… And, remember : “Truth is always bitter…”
Soman Ragavan. 22 October, 2023. //
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I guess u are right sir I will delete it 🙂
No, don’t delete it. A poem is a literary creation. Let it remain. It has a life of its own. When you wrote it, you genuinely believed in the ideas. You wrote it out of innocence. That innocence is more valuable than the words you wrote.
You can write a sequel to it, saying, upon further consideration and advice, you have come to realise that…. etc….
It is not wrong to put up a second, different opinion. We all learn throughout life.
Best wishes to you, kind friend. I truly wish you full success, happiness and prosperity in life. Soman Ragavan. 22 October, 2023. //
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Thanku sir for motivating me...
Friendship doesn't just happen, it needs to be taken care of, nice poem!
Thanks sir 🙂
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