Romeo, my heart be broken
I fell upon your love
you fell upon mine, so it seemed
two important lovers
entwined forever in a myth
it was you
who wanted me gone
“you bastard”
you gave me the glass
I thought it was filled with prosecco
alas, we are both still here
i’m not speaking to you anymore
we will never be famous now
well…
maybe just on Facebook?
the end...
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the end of us.
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A twist on olde Will's R & J, with a more gruesome ending. Whatever brought you to this table? Yet it is truly well done and enjoyed by me.
Nice work. - Phil A.
LoL I have a terribly naughty mind that is all. Thank you for enjoying my very modern tale dearest Phil, always humbled when you pass by sir. ❤️
Dear God!! But listen, "I thought it was filled with prosecco"----how rude!!! Missing out big time!! 😆💖
Dear Liz, you are a true gem, thank you for chuckling ❤️ lol damn sure it's prosecco girl.
Fantastic. I love it. Very creative.
Thank you so much Thomas. ❤️
You are a very norty gurl go stand on the norty step then write out ya name, address and cell phone numba 500 times .. burn 499 of em then screw .. the last one in a ball and hand it to me at playtime ..
I'll bring the prosecco well iced .. ❤️
Prosecco well iced? you know me far too well. LoL 🤣 ❤️
another write for my 'must read' collection Teddy;
LoL oh how very honoured am I dearest Melvin. ❤️ thank you my dear friend. ❤️
A great twist on an old tale. Funny how time changes things.
"Romeo, my heart be broken"
This story has always been a tragedy .
"I fell upon your love"
In the original it was he that fell of the dagger from love of her. Another twist.
"it was you
who wanted me gone
“you bastard”"
The major twist here.
"alas, we are both still here
i’m not speaking to you anymore"
Another twist it was death in the first case now life, and with it no fame. Ah the cost of fame. A fun and yet pensive write.
thank you so much my dear sorrenbarret, a very modern tale twisted up like a posh cocktail or maybe not lol 🌹
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