The general speaks:
„Soldiers, you can all go home.
The war is over!“
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Author:
Norman Flagtea (
Offline) - Published: October 25th, 2023 15:34
- Category: Haiku
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The general speaks:
„Soldiers, you can all go home.
The war is over!“
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Comments5
Fantastic sentiment.
Always very friendly reactions! Thank you very much, Thomas
Which general was That?
I wish I could tell you. Thank you for your comment/question...
One can hope. although it's actually a senryu simply because it focuses on emotion rather than imagery just to help you. Haiku is about nature and imagery of nature. ❤️ in any case a lovely thought
Dear Teddy san! Thank you for your friendly comment. And you are quite right about Haiku - Senryu. My mistake...
Interesting how a few lines can create a whole imagined scene for the reader... I see thousands of tired dirty scarred warriors drop their shields in a pile and begin to trudge home to their fields and families.
Dear jarcher! Your reaction made my day! Isn't that why we write poetry: to evoke thoughts and emotions like yours...?
The order of seasons
5 3 7
no emotions
Thank you for your reaction! Can you please explain a little further: what does 5 3 7 refer to...
sorry I mean a structure of 17 syllables (5 .7.5 ) in 3 lines
jump the tree frog
in the meditation
jolly chatterbox
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