If I say
Sail away
For the day
We could lay
On a beach with the finest of sand
Hit a bar
Play guitar
Go too far
Name a star
Dance whilst singing along to the band
When we're done
We could run
To the sun
Have some fun
Take my heart heal my soul hold my hand
Don't be shy
Let's get high
Laugh and cry
Question why
We keep trying to keep up with demand
Up the game
We're the same
Call my name
Burn the flame
Take a chance and let's see where we land
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Author:
peto (
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- Users favorite of this poem: Christina8, Introverted Sage, Bella Shepard
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Comments8
Lovely writing 🙂
Thank you Violet
I really like this style of your poetry! Oh to lay in the sand and answer life's questions....."Call my name/burn the flame" Leaves wonderful imagery for the mind to play out.
Like to mix it up a bit from time to time
See what works
Thanks a lot Christina
Appreciated
Truly appreciate your continued support
Many thanks
Ummmm 'Don't be shy Let's get high' sounds about right!! 🤭
Works for me LIZ
Extremely grateful for your time
Excellent.
Cheers Thomas
These words whisk my mind away in so carefree a way my friend, that it cares not for coming back... An elope of note sir! Well written Peto. 👌🏼
Great to see you Garth
Many thanks for such a comment
Who wouldn't want to take that chance!
And top notch flow to match.
Love it
Appreciate your time and support very much
Thank you
The rhyming pattern of this poem adds such an element of fun as read aloud. Sweet sentiment builds with each stanza, culminating in that beautiful "take a chance". Loved every syllable!
Ah Bella
Truly appreciate your kind words
Thank you
Great.
Thank you muse
Good to meet you
I'll check out your writing very shortly
Many thanks
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