Notice of absence from maria rk.
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if i'm not responding within 30 minutes (or a few hours, depending on the time), i probably forgot about the site, or i'm super busy with life, amongst other things.
the heart whispers in my chest,
beating low in my ribcage,
it murmurs lowly about love and dreams,
begging to wander on its blessed quest.
the heart whispers in my chest,
but the head sees no reason to find rest,
in persuing this tantalizing request.
the heart whispers in my chest,
beating low in my ribcage,
it cooed to the brain,
enticing pictures of flying high
the mind shakes it head, immune to the heat’s gentle pleas,
the mind is still cautious, and replies “oh, but why?”.
- R.K.
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Author:
R.K. (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: October 27th, 2023 09:00
- Comment from author about the poem: trying out different forms of poetry (triolet, to be exact), critisim is highly appreciated!
- Category: Reflection
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Comments1
Great job, and the eternal struggle between heart and head.
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